This before and after is for a member of one of my LinkedIn Groups.
Sharon’s site is here: http://www.rhythmandrhyme.co.za
My tips for improving it for attracting clients …
I see lots of white. That feels great! A big plus. Cluttered, noisy sites are a minus.
(But, you may be surprised at how some sites look bad really do great, but that’s a story for another day).
I dislike your domain … read on