In my homey EG’s LinkedIn group, Coaches Support Group, I’m doing free website reviews (you should go post yours and get some tips to improve it for client attraction).
Here’s one for Danielle Hall and her site is http://www.danielljehall.com.
Great smile Danielle. I get nice feeling about you from your pic.
I’d make a big headline or opening statement that speaks about the benefits you bring … read on