Before and After for Geraldine
This is a quick tip for improving Geraldine’s website.
Her site is here: Mindfulness Coaching Works.
Thanks for posting it, Geraldine.
I like the white space and clean layout. Things are easy to follow on your site. Great!
I think your site suffers from the #1 challenge most coaching sites face.
There’s NO BIG BENEFIT.
People need to know why they should explore your website.
It needs to be clear instantly – and it needs to be great.
One great way to engage them and give them a compelling reason to stick around you is by creating a juicy headline.
Most coaches bury the juicy stuff at the end of the About page, just like you did.
Instead, make that first, as shown below.
Here’s the before:
Here’s the after: (I got this text from the bottom of your Why I Coach page and added a little)
After you get a great headline up, follow up with more content to help your visitors.
Build an image as an expert – a guru – a catalyst for help.
I actually had my site like that and then my clients asked me why don’t I add my credibility first? But looking at this I think I’ll change it back and add credibility at the bottom. Great food for thought
I love it and I’m an drawn to what I woukd get, what I would benefit from joining. Great tips
Thanks again
I get it. Thanks for the on time information I can apply right away
Great before and after of using the wright “copy” Thank you for sharing.