Website Client-Attraction Tip for Lawrie
To improve Lawrie Scott’s life coaching website for client-attraction, here are before-and-after images along with my suggested tweak.
If you want me to review your coaching website schedule some quality time with me here and we’ll find high-impact yet easy-to-do enhancements to improve your website for client-attraction.
Before screenshot …
My suggested tweak for attracting more clients to your website …
I like the tagline “Life Coaching & Mentoring Services” because it helps me quickly understand your site. That’s actually a big plus compared to so many other sites I’ve reviewed. Beach picture works well too … how often are we on the beach pondering life? Great visual.
I suggest getting your face (the coach they want help from) along with a strong statement (not “what is coaching”) up to the top of the home page – highly visible. I took some copy buried in your site for this.
Here’s the after screenshot …
What do you think? Like the suggestion? Have ideas to make it even better? I’d love to hear from you. Just comment below.
Looking at it now, I think I’d actually switch the smaller paragraph with the bigger one … it’s juicier. Absolutely 😉
I like that it gives an immediate benefit, “how do we make great things happen for you?” Great revision!
Thanks for sharing that Rolsyn.
I like that there is a picture added and it is the right thing to do. That being said, I think it would be EVEN MORE APPEALING if the photo used was Lawrie in a shirt or background with color. It would create some connection to the picture above. I like the font choices, the description…but the picture needs to be more integrated with color or style.
NICE WORK!
LIKE! That’s an advanced design idea, nice.
Hi Kenn,
Many thanks for viewing my website and taking the time to give me constructive, positive feedback. As I appreciate how busy you are and the many others your are providing support too.
I like the changes you suggest to the front page ABOUT ME. By using the stuff I have provided but having it in a stand out place, first headline that can catch the eye and interest and to reduce the waffle about, what is coaching.
I assume other areas of the website meets with approval. I will make the tweaks – changes, thank you so much for your time Kenn – appreciated.
Kind regards
Lawrie
Sadly, being human, I must eat, sleep, poop and smile from time to time. And thus, don’t have time right now to go into all the “other aspects” ;D … But, I would recommend you consider:
(1) Big picture strategy and results you’re aiming for
(2) The actions you are expecting from visitors.
(3) That you’re getting traffic, from good places, smoothly.
(4) Get numbers regularly – they tell the story of course.a
Yeah, sure, happy to help. Thanks for posting your site for us all to learn from.
Great tweak.
Except I’d love to see some footprints in the sand!