Before and After for Douglas Simpson
Here’s a website before and after for spiritual awakening coach Douglas Simpson. If you want your website looked at for a quick tweak to improve it, just schedule some quality time with me here and we’ll find high-impact yet easy-to-do enhancements to improve your website for client-attraction.
Here’s the before
Here’s my suggested tweak
Douglas, you’ve got a lot going for you on the site. Good job on the sign-up box to grow your list, a prominent photo of you as an expert and client-focused copy – questions are nice.
I suggest moving your face into the header instead and getting the opt-in up on the page (ditch the second logo too – feels scattery).
Also, speak more to the benefits in your headline … I picked out some.
Here’s the after
What do you think? Like the suggestion? Have ideas to make it even better? I’d love to hear from you. Just comment below.
Yes Kenn, I agree. I modified the site. Thanks for the review and input!
DJ – For sure I have no desire to scream at anyone. My message is peace not noise and aggravation. Any further comments are welcome.
Thanks!
http://www.flowyourlife.com
Hey Doug, like the tweaks you made … especially the bigger headline on the home page (that first block of text). Please report back if you start getting positive reactions to your site – maybe even send it out to a few people to see what they think (could be more gems to improve).
Much cleaner!
Moving his picture up with his name and cleaning up the images made such a difference. Everything is so much easier to read. The questions instantly clarify what he does for his clients. Awesome.
Wow! That is so much better! Very impressive…
Kenn so much better, calmer, cleaner.
A much calmer effect ….
Before… I feel screamed at….the After… feels like we are having tea together and way more peaceful
Dj Segovia
http://www.linkedin.com/in/djSegovia